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Pretty good

I like your basic melody line, and the beat in total. At 1:10, do you hear that little "squeek"? In my opinion it's a little annoying (lol). If those could be replaced with some sort of Phase effect, or some other kind of sample to make the song become a "suspence builder," then it would be even better than what it is now.
Keep it up!
~Absol

lidlurch responds:

thanks dude! lol, yeah i thought that i would leave that in as a reminder of how it's electronic, allbeit that theres an acoustic percussion break ;) haha, i'll keep that in mind, it always was a bit iffy at that part. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CRITICISM!! i love it. i'm going to make such a great second draft! lol

Consider a Melody

A good composition overall, but it could be a lot better if you had a melody line which creates a buildup. Everybody loves those.
Other than that, again, its good, Keep it up! :)

~Absol

ragingmullet responds:

Thank you my friend!

Great...

... Melody line! :)
I like @ around :30 seconds the acctual melody line kicks in. Keep stuff like that up, and you're sure to have great results! :)

~Absol

DanceNation responds:

Yea, Thanks :D

Short

A great composition, I must admit - but people complain about my stuff, due to the fact that some are too long, this one is just too short. A great time span for quick things like this should be somwhere around: 1:30 to around 2:40.54 Seconds. You get the point, ;)

~Absol

Pretty good

I like how you plainly state how people have to learn, It's what I had to do as well. Keep this up, you'll be on a good road. If we were still back in the 90's this song would be a wicked heat (awsome).
all I can say is, Keep on this path. :)

~Absol

I enjoy making Trance music, and I also enjoy criticizing other peoples trance music that is in dire need of a helping hand.

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