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But considering so, this song is packed with a sh*t load of character!

The melody itself and the underlead / pad is quite good, nothing I would change there.

This loops really well too.
Shame this was bombed :\

I suggest you finish this up, I personally think it has potential!

~OmNi

OPQC responds:

yep, bombed right away when it was submitted... with 3 zeroes.

but thanks for the comment :) i think i'll do something with this on my time.

Hmm...

Personally, It's alright.
I find that it doesn't flow to well though - a must would be to remove the backward kicks from the beginning of the song. The lead gets a little bit annoying after a while, because it's so high pitch.

Other than that, it was decent. 7x4

Y2k4never responds:

it was realy meant for headphones, and this was a tune i had made for my freind Y2k4ever's website, if your wondering were freinds not the same person, any ways, this was just a trippy little tune meant to intro duce his website nubegrounds well thanks for the review and glad u told me this, next song wont be so high pich :3

love it

keep it up ye?

imakethebettermusic responds:

Thanks!

~X

whats up

so hi

Moots420 responds:

like it?

You said it yourself

You're still learning.
I'm not really talented with DnB, but I can give you a tip that I'm sure everybody would suggest too:
The screeching sound in the background should go!
Other than that, it's pretty good!
8/5!
~Absol

Wow

The good part begins at 0:25!
ABSOLUTELY - Continue this, It's amazing !

Wow...

The word Wow coming from me, doesn't come out often.
You should be grateful.
Great song overall, Nothing that you should improve in my opinion.

~Absol

LK412 responds:

Thanks a lot man!!!!

Hey -

I guess it's your first, can't downtalk about it too much.

I'll try to give some ideas to you.

The static I hear throughout the song - Should go, It get's to be hard on the ears after about 30 seconds.

Your trancegate is fine, However - I think u should mix a few notes at a time, and hold them for a bit longer. Then add your leads, kicks, stuff like that.

The leads you add in this, don't really match the mood that your trance-gate sets, and sound like it goes off-tune.

However, this is only your first - so I'm going to keep an eye out for your future work because i think you have some potential!
Keep it up!
~Absolix.

AudioNationz responds:

Well... Uhhh >.< I'd have to start over. I don't have the free version, therefore I can't save project files.

Tune down on the...

Bass. It got a little deafning. You have a great potential if u tone down a bit :P

Puba00 responds:

ok thanks for the feedback i will tune down in my next songs

Bass and Kick

I find the bass and kicks a little annoying in the first portion of the song. You helped yourself get back on track, and keep me listening to the song by the slight buildup, and higher pitch of the melody.
I suggest adding a deeper kick, and a bit higher variety of sounds.
Keep it up!
~absol

I enjoy making Trance music, and I also enjoy criticizing other peoples trance music that is in dire need of a helping hand.

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