Hey -
I guess it's your first, can't downtalk about it too much.
I'll try to give some ideas to you.
The static I hear throughout the song - Should go, It get's to be hard on the ears after about 30 seconds.
Your trancegate is fine, However - I think u should mix a few notes at a time, and hold them for a bit longer. Then add your leads, kicks, stuff like that.
The leads you add in this, don't really match the mood that your trance-gate sets, and sound like it goes off-tune.
However, this is only your first - so I'm going to keep an eye out for your future work because i think you have some potential!
Keep it up!
~Absolix.