Absolix's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[0rgan loop]

whats up

so hi

Moots420 responds:

like it?

[FLOOD v1]

You said it yourself

You're still learning.
I'm not really talented with DnB, but I can give you a tip that I'm sure everybody would suggest too:
The screeching sound in the background should go!
Other than that, it's pretty good!
8/5!
~Absol

[House Sample]

Wow

The good part begins at 0:25!
ABSOLUTELY - Continue this, It's amazing !

[[LK] Exhilarate]

Wow...

The word Wow coming from me, doesn't come out often.
You should be grateful.
Great song overall, Nothing that you should improve in my opinion.

~Absol

LK412 responds:

Thanks a lot man!!!!

[My first trance =)]

Hey -

I guess it's your first, can't downtalk about it too much.

I'll try to give some ideas to you.

The static I hear throughout the song - Should go, It get's to be hard on the ears after about 30 seconds.

Your trancegate is fine, However - I think u should mix a few notes at a time, and hold them for a bit longer. Then add your leads, kicks, stuff like that.

The leads you add in this, don't really match the mood that your trance-gate sets, and sound like it goes off-tune.

However, this is only your first - so I'm going to keep an eye out for your future work because i think you have some potential!
Keep it up!
~Absolix.

AudioNationz responds:

Well... Uhhh >.< I'd have to start over. I don't have the free version, therefore I can't save project files.

[Poltergeist (project)]

Tune down on the...

Bass. It got a little deafning. You have a great potential if u tone down a bit :P

Puba00 responds:

ok thanks for the feedback i will tune down in my next songs

[300Mbps]

Bass and Kick

I find the bass and kicks a little annoying in the first portion of the song. You helped yourself get back on track, and keep me listening to the song by the slight buildup, and higher pitch of the melody.
I suggest adding a deeper kick, and a bit higher variety of sounds.
Keep it up!
~absol

[Forming Anesthetic]

Pretty good

I like your basic melody line, and the beat in total. At 1:10, do you hear that little "squeek"? In my opinion it's a little annoying (lol). If those could be replaced with some sort of Phase effect, or some other kind of sample to make the song become a "suspence builder," then it would be even better than what it is now.
Keep it up!
~Absol

lidlurch responds:

thanks dude! lol, yeah i thought that i would leave that in as a reminder of how it's electronic, allbeit that theres an acoustic percussion break ;) haha, i'll keep that in mind, it always was a bit iffy at that part. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CRITICISM!! i love it. i'm going to make such a great second draft! lol

[Righteous (FL3)]

Consider a Melody

A good composition overall, but it could be a lot better if you had a melody line which creates a buildup. Everybody loves those.
Other than that, again, its good, Keep it up! :)

~Absol

ragingmullet responds:

Thank you my friend!

[[DN] BassHunter FestFolk [RM]]

Great...

... Melody line! :)
I like @ around :30 seconds the acctual melody line kicks in. Keep stuff like that up, and you're sure to have great results! :)

~Absol

DanceNation responds:

Yea, Thanks :D