Absolix's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[0rgan loop]

whats up

so hi

Moots420 responds:

like it?

[[LK] Exhilarate]

Wow...

The word Wow coming from me, doesn't come out often.
You should be grateful.
Great song overall, Nothing that you should improve in my opinion.

~Absol

LK412 responds:

Thanks a lot man!!!!

[My first trance =)]

Hey -

I guess it's your first, can't downtalk about it too much.

I'll try to give some ideas to you.

The static I hear throughout the song - Should go, It get's to be hard on the ears after about 30 seconds.

Your trancegate is fine, However - I think u should mix a few notes at a time, and hold them for a bit longer. Then add your leads, kicks, stuff like that.

The leads you add in this, don't really match the mood that your trance-gate sets, and sound like it goes off-tune.

However, this is only your first - so I'm going to keep an eye out for your future work because i think you have some potential!
Keep it up!
~Absolix.

AudioNationz responds:

Well... Uhhh >.< I'd have to start over. I don't have the free version, therefore I can't save project files.

[Poltergeist (project)]

Tune down on the...

Bass. It got a little deafning. You have a great potential if u tone down a bit :P

Puba00 responds:

ok thanks for the feedback i will tune down in my next songs

[Forming Anesthetic]

Pretty good

I like your basic melody line, and the beat in total. At 1:10, do you hear that little "squeek"? In my opinion it's a little annoying (lol). If those could be replaced with some sort of Phase effect, or some other kind of sample to make the song become a "suspence builder," then it would be even better than what it is now.
Keep it up!
~Absol

lidlurch responds:

thanks dude! lol, yeah i thought that i would leave that in as a reminder of how it's electronic, allbeit that theres an acoustic percussion break ;) haha, i'll keep that in mind, it always was a bit iffy at that part. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CRITICISM!! i love it. i'm going to make such a great second draft! lol

[Righteous (FL3)]

Consider a Melody

A good composition overall, but it could be a lot better if you had a melody line which creates a buildup. Everybody loves those.
Other than that, again, its good, Keep it up! :)

~Absol

ragingmullet responds:

Thank you my friend!

[[DN] BassHunter FestFolk [RM]]

Great...

... Melody line! :)
I like @ around :30 seconds the acctual melody line kicks in. Keep stuff like that up, and you're sure to have great results! :)

~Absol

DanceNation responds:

Yea, Thanks :D